Here is a part of my resume. I've heard that biz's like the paragraph format instead of this bullet format since it makes it more personal (like I did that and I did that)

Can someone please help me? This is for a Server (waitress)

Thanks in Advance. This is real - Im 36 and this isnt school work...btw.



Server, North Austin Restaurant.

Excellent customer service skills. Awareness of health and safety and personal hygiene the workplace. Ability to work calmly and effective under pressure. Excellent communication and interpersonal skills. Good numerical skills for handling customers' bills. Ability to work proactively within a team and on own initiative. Ability to handle difficult customers in a calm and tactful manner.